【每日知识】不要把和段落主题不相干的句子加进来

Teenagers, dating couples, and families all like to visit the mall.

Teenagers love to roam the mall in packs, like wolves. They often dress alike, depending on fashion. They're noisy and sometimes rude, and mall secuiy officers someimes kick them out of the building. Then they find somewhere else to go, maybe one of the warehouse-sized amusement and video game arcades that are springing up everywhere.

这段话里面标注高亮的句子放在文中十分不恰当。

很多人写论文就会犯这个毛病，想到哪说哪。

比如这里想到teenager就写teenager。但是，整体框架是说mall给人带来欢乐。并没有消极表述在里面。

标高亮的明显和整体逻辑不符合。因此，应该调整句子结构。